My ANGRY moment
“Let me go!” I yelled at Olivia and Claudia. There were tsunamis of sweat brushing down my face, while I was ripping free. My hands tensed together like they were super glued together. Sprinting towards my room knowing that Olivia was there but not knowing that she had one of my special toys. “GET OUT!” I furiously shouted at her pushing pushing her and shoving her out. That’s when I noticed she stole my toy, “GIVE IT BACK!”
A very powerful piece of writing Ari, well done. I can clearly see from your use of the Show Not Tell technique that you are really really angry.
ReplyDeleteI am wondering what happens next!!!!